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Tak Imsen
« on: January 29, 2017, 10:20:31 PM »

Name: Tak Imsen

Age: 65

Rank: Dark Jedi Master

Origin: Naboo

Appearance: The man is about five feet ten inches tall, his build is average to a little on the slim side. The hair is white as per his age, the eyes an intense dark cobalt blue.

History:

Tak was once many years ago a loyal citizen along with his family on the world of Naboo. All that changed when he reached the age of about six or so,  only to discover that he had the 'touch' as someone called it. It was the ability to sense the force. His father insisted he be tested, which was done fairly soon by a young Jedi, then arrangements were made for him to be sent to the Jedi school on Coruscant. He trained under a Master Jedi, it was quite apparent from the beginning he was rather talented, picking up all the forms necessary, though he was soon being drawn nearer and nearer to the dark side of the force. The temptation though great soon passed him, Tak went on to become a well rounded Jedi Knight, then eventually after some twenty years or so, he became a Master.

For quite some time he disappeared from view for quite a few years, only to resurface more recently as a follower of Count Dooku. He serves the Emperor and the Empire faithfully to this day and with partial fleet at his disposal to continue in the search for those force sensitives that escaped the order 66, Tak has to date eliminated or turned at least eighteen, two of whom were trained Jedi.
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Re: Tak Imsen
« Reply #1 on: June 15, 2017, 11:43:55 AM »
A couple of points, but otherwise, okay.

1) Tython isn't in Canon anymore, so it'd have to be training on the Jedi Temple on Coruscant.

2) I can't really approve him commanding an entire fleet, but the Emperor has recruited plenty of Dark Jedi and Sith underlings as Inquisitors, so if that works, I'm good with it. The only reason for it is because if he basically outranks the Task Force's authority, then it kind of leads down some slippery slopes.

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Re: Tak Imsen
« Reply #2 on: June 21, 2017, 08:06:47 PM »
I've made some changes there, how does he look now?

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Re: Tak Imsen
« Reply #3 on: June 21, 2017, 10:33:55 PM »
Perfect, hits the nail right on the head. Alright, you are good to go.  :yes:

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Re: Tak Imsen
« Reply #4 on: June 26, 2017, 12:32:12 AM »
At some point I'll endeavor to fill him out a little more as he grows. If of course I remember to.  :fp